BLISS RATING: ★★★+
“INSECURITY: There are so many battles worth fighting. The ones not worth fighting are the insecure battles that rage in another person’s mind.” – Shannon L. Alder
Unquestionably, the brilliance of this second season lies with its screenplay. This is by far one of the best scripted series I have ever seen. It is a remarkably brilliant piece of prose that flows like a cascade down a magnificent waterfall. It is descriptive, expressive, and cogent. The words deluge from the characters in a string of beautiful fluency that leaves you breathless with its picturesque description of their actions. And herein lies, ironically, the weakness to this series. It is all words.
This is a continuation of the story of the relationship of Shikhar (Garvit Ahuja) and Agastya (Chaitanya Vyaas). They have now been in their relationship for nearly one year and have settled into ‘routines’. That has not necessarily lessened the issues surrounding their relationship, however. Even as Meera (Juhi Arora), their best friend, seems happy in her new romance with Rehan (Ashis Choudhary), someone from Shikhar’s past unexpectedly reenters his life. Tarun (Rohit Chaudhary), Shikhar’s first love, hurt him deeply and left him emotionally scarred, numb, and living a largely joyless life. Still and all, that slowly began to change when Shikhar met Agastya. Yet rather than walking away from accidentally meeting him again after 8 years, Shikhar seems to be drawn to him.
The chronicle of this story both unfolds and then unravels under what I consider are the five demon protocols that can truly bring down any relationship, be it gay or straight. These topple the foundations of both bonds in this chronicle:
- Insecurity. One’s internal insecurity about who he/she is and his/her own sense of importance in a relationship. It is irrelevant how long the relationship might be. Sometimes that insecurity merely reinforces itself, as we witness here. Agastya’s insecurities are manifested tenfold when he finds out the extent of Shikhar’s background with Tarun. Agastya loves to wallow in his own insecurities. This is not limited merely to them. Meera’s, because of her previous hurts, also allows her own strong sense of insecurity to get the best of her with Rehan.
- Feeling of worthlessness. This is a companion emotion but comes into its own when it can be heightened exponentially by the occurrence of even the slightest sense of criticism or dismissiveness in a relationship. This emotion then takes on a whole new meaning and becomes its own singularity.
- Emotional distance from your partner. As relationships develop, there is a certain amount of boredom and sameness that occurs. Sometimes this might be due to the fact that the other partner is ‘wired’ differently, and their level of involvement is not as strong, or deep, or meets a perceived level of expectation. Hence, a sense of being taken for granted occurs or irritation and annoyance might set in because everything becomes familiar and the love becomes mundane.
- Misjudging and misunderstanding because of a lack of meaningful communication between partners. The one prime truism in nearly all breakups in all relationships is this: what are the expectations Can I be truthful? Will I be believed? We see and hear what we want to see or hear. Not what might be reality. And we act accordingly.
- The temptation by the forbidden fruit of past relationships (no matter what the consequences were) and the umbrage that surrounded that. It is always perilous to play with sentiments from the past in your current relationship without the clear understanding that it undoubtedly will lead to no good in the long run, as so much can and no doubt will be misunderstood. Those misunderstandings can either be real or merely in the minds of the beholder. In either case, there is danger.
This story intertwines and blunders into these five-demon modus operandi for both couples but more intensely for Agastya and Shikhar. With Agastya heightened insecurities finally reaching a breaking point and then finally shattering, he does the one act that becomes unforgivable. Yet, in a mirror reflection, Shikhar knows because of his inability to fully share or emotionally connect with Agastya, he set up the perfect storm for such a deed to happen. He knew, in every sense, who Tarun was.
Who really S.T.O.L.E. this series? Tarun. And Rohit Chaudhary as Tarun runs with this role eclipsing everyone else. He dominates this series. Not only with his commanding masculine presence, but his manipulative abilities. He is a master manipulator of people, places, and things. Tarun commands everyone around him. What he did to younger Shikhar was not just unforgiveable, it was heartless, cruel, and he knew his actions would wound him for life. And that is exactly his intent. He wanted Shikhar to remember him and that he did. When meeting Shikhar again, he played with his emotions and knew full well what he could do to ultimately hurt Shikhar and obtain the ultimate prize. And that was Agastya. He prayed on Agastya’s weaknesses, exploited his insecurities, and zeroed in on his worthlessness, and projected the blame on Shikhar’s emotional distance from him. He became Agastya’s savior and to bask in his warmth to save him, was to be intimate with him. It was the perfect set up. Tarun walks away with the Grand Prize. He had Shikhar AND his lover. Rohit Chaudhary plays his part with all the sweet innocence that makes him an antagonist without being labeled as such. His sweet smile, his schism with his own family, and the struggles he is dealing with internally make him in some sense a sad figure. Yet, he was in complete control and chose the path that would lead to the most pain and feed his ego. That, in my opinion, makes him a shameful person.
Unfortunately, for me, the actual theatrics to making this eloquent screenplay come alive did not match the same intensity. For me, the lead performances felt tired and limited in range, especially compared with the first series at its peak. I was disappointed in the emotional impact I was expecting from the words. It just never materialized visually. The heart and soul of this series felt missing. It just seemed to be coming across as rote to me. Like delivering lines with little emotive meaning behind those words. We as the audience need to see some change in the characters; but little was displayed. And what emotions that were going to happen were telegraphed by the dialogue. At times, the screenplay revealed too much too early, which further weakened the emotional impact of the protagonists’ actions. We knew what was going to happen.
Sadly, in several scenes, I thought the acting was just plain second-rate. One of my measurements for effective acting is how deep are the performers willing to go with emotional desolation. One criterion between a mediocre performance and a great one is if the audience feels the same emotion that the character is trying to emote. When I see no tears or deeply sad eyes when the scenes clearly call for weeping to be displayed and there are none (or worse – crocodile tears), I am not just disappointed; I withdraw and lose interest. And when performers wipe away pretend tears, I check out. That is the ultimate sign of insincerity. Regrettably, it is all a sign of hollowness and maladroit acting. The story becomes feckless.
I also thought the ending was oddly rushed and felt just too contrived to be believed. There could have been more done with this series. Rather than scene after scene of both Agastya and Shikhar feeling sorry for themselves, we could have been treated with a way better and more in-depth reconnection between the two of them. For example, for all the bluster Shikhar said about ‘cheating’ and the pontification of Agastya stated about the same topic, there was shocking little to their resolution. The same is true for Meera and Rehan. Both couples deserved more time, care, and emotional depth than a brief scene of them rocking in a boat looking sea-sick, which felt far too slight for moments that called for greater fortitude and seriousness. All of that seemed so awkward. Agastya and Shikhar’s sanctity had been broken and shattered. Amending it will take time. They could have dealt with this with greater sensitivity. Even if it felt ‘unresolved’, that is better than a superficial treatment of a rather soul-searching breach of trust.
It stands to reason that individuals are going to change after a year. For good or ill. We needed to see more to make this more tangible and relatable. While it is an exceptionally and phenomenally well-written screenplay, I just do not think the acting rose to the occasion. The ending seemed a bit too staged, did not come across as believable or genuine, and seemed so rushed just to finish.
Perhaps not all stories need to continue.


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